Very nice! I think Attica's suggestions were spot on, and you tied up a sweet looking jig that will surely get chomped on. I think to make it look even more 'perchy', you could use olive or dark green material in place of the black on top. To make it a 'Fire-Tiger' pattern use chartreuse instead of the black on top. I think all would look very cool in the style you are tying. Well done.
John